Devoir d'anglais
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                                                                                                                            That day, he had met God
First, we can notice the progression of the religious domain, in opposition to the magical
one.
                                                            
                                                                                
                                                                      One   might   think   that   this   represents   the   victory   of   christianism   against   paganism.
                                                            
                                                                                
                                                                      The
very   beginning   of   the   story  (“Once   upon   a  time”   l.1)   introduces  a   fairy   tale,   a   magical   world.
Then, the vanity in the place is “displayed” (l.5), as if it had his own will.
                                                            
                                                                                
                                                                    In comparison, in this
first   part   of   the   text,   there   are   only   four   words   related   to   religion:   “Gee”   (l.2),   “vanity”   (l.4),
“Damn”  (l.7), “Satan” (l.8).
                                                            
                                                                                
                                                                    Besides, they are not very  sententious or  positive terms.
                                                            
                                                                                
                                                                     As John's
personality is evolving, the lexical field related to religion becomes more and more important:
in   the   second   part   we   can   see   nine   words,   and   thirteen   in   the   last   part   of   the   revelation.
Therefore,   the   progression   of   religion   in   John's   spirit   is   not   only   in   his   actions   but   also   in   the
language   used   to   describe   them.
                                                            
                                                                                
                                                                      Throughout   the   text,   words   evolve   from   simple   vulgar
vocabulary to evocation and finally recognition, as John's faith grows inside him.
This   shows   that   the   narrator's   voice   and   John's   voice   are   intimately   linked.
                                                            
                                                                                
                                                                      This   is
obvious throughout the text.
                                                            
                                                                                
                                                                    Very quickly (l.2), the direct speech is introduced with a very oral
style (“Gee!”) which makes the text vivid and participates to a beginning of confusion between
the   narrative   voice   and   the   character's  one.
                                                            
                                                                                
                                                                      The   doubt   as   for   the   limits   of   each   voice   is   then
introduced   (“He   did   not   know”):   who   is   asking?  And   a  few   lines  later,   the   transition   from   two
distinct  points of view to two  mixed points  of view is completed, thanks to the  introduction of
the   free   indirect   speech   which   blurs   the   limits.
                                                            
                                                                                
                                                                      It   is   marked   by   the   disappearance   of   the
quotation   marks,   in   addition   to   an   oral   language   and   an   onomatopoeia.
                                                            
                                                                                
                                                                      The   free   indirect
speech   returns   later   (l.19-24).
                                                            
                                                                                
                                                                      Finally,   the   parallelism   between   “Because   he   was  alone   in   that
place.” (l.24) and “Surely the Lord is in this place” (l.32) highlights the fact that there is after all
only  one voice.
                                                            
                                                                                
                                                                     If the  narrator  had  a  very distinct voice,  he  would  have  said  immediately that
the main character was not alone.
This   religious   evolution   comes   with   an   evolution   in   John's   personality.
                                                            
                                                                                
                                                                      A   lesson   of
humility reveals itself through the structure of the text under study.
                                                            
                                                                                
                                                                    We can see that in the first
part, everything is centered around John - until the crash.
                                                            
                                                                        
                                                                    The first part actually begins with “a
man”,   whereas   the   second   one   is   introduced   by   “every   passenger”   and   the   third   one   starts
with “the rest of the world”.
                                                            
                                                                                
                                                                    The last sentence reunites “he” and “God”, and supposedly he and
the   rest   of   the   world   (with   the   presence   of   the   army).
                                                            
                                                                                
                                                                      It   seems   therefore   that   the   divine
revelation   also   means   that   he   has   quit   misanthropy.
                                                            
                                                                                
                                                                      Then   he   truly   becomes   a   hero   (l.19-24),
fighting the devil's trap, enduring an ordeal, having strength and hope...
                                                            
                                                                                
                                                                    etc.
                                                            
                                                                                
                                                                    And when he does
become a hero, he asks for help, which stands for a lesson of humility.
                                                            
                                                                                
                                                                    The structure also shows
the  time  evolution:  the  first part begins with “once upon  a  time”,  the  second one  with “about
ten hours after every passenger had been killed” and the third one with “three years went by”:
the   text   goes   from   a   very   vague   temporal   anchorage   to   a   more   specific   one.
                                                            
                                                                                
                                                                      So   maybe   it
mimetically represents the character's growing awareness of the world.
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III.
                                                            
                                                                                
                                                                    The ambiguity of the writing
This   character's   evolution   is   one   of   the   main   points   of   this   text.
                                                            
                                                                                
                                                                      The   writing   which
organizes it is another one.
In this text, words are given a significant importance.
                                                            
                                                                                
                                                                    They are seen as actors since the
very   beginning:   “the   vanity   displayed   by   the   conversations   of   his   neighbours”   (l.5).
                                                            
                                                                                
                                                                      In   this
segment,   the   passive   structure,   in   addition   to   the   real   subject   being   “the   conversations”
reveals  that vanity  is  displayed  by language,  which  reduces  very  much the  importance   of  the
neighbours as actors – as it would normally be expected to be.
Therefore,   we  can  suppose   that  the   author   deals  with   language   with  a   huge   attention.
One of the major themes he employs is a  contrasted  writing.
                                                            
                                                                                
                                                                    We can see it  in the  whole  text.
Here   are   some   of   the   most   significant   examples:   the   return   to   quotation   marks,   neutral   cold
formal   voice   just   after   John's   diatribe   (l.10)   produces   a   strong   contrast,   enhanced   by   the
objectivity of the voice (marked by the expression “Ladies and gentlemen” and the “our ” which
suddenly   introduces an  other  person   than  “he”.)  Right  after   that,  the   expression  “neat  crash”
suprises   the   reader   too.
                                                            
                                                                                
                                                                      The   beginning   of   the   second   part   plays   with   the   atmosphere:   the
reader goes from fairy tale to horror, from “once upon a time” to “about ten hours after every
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